Airport Writing
My stomach was stuffed with butterflies and in my head I was thinking about what happens if we miss the flight what if it is canceled all the negatives running through my head. We walked through “Show us your passports” the person at the check in said. We sit down and put our seat belts on and take off!!
Hi Kobe I like the way you explained what was going through your mind. Maybe next time you could give us some more information. Here is my link to my blog https://odslucam.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteKobe you could tell us where you are and were your going and some story of what was at the place you were going.
ReplyDeleteHi Kobe! I like how you did a descriptive Piece of work! Man I wonder what it would be like to miss a flight.But maybe next time you could say were you are going? and more about the flight?
ReplyDeleteHello Kobe
ReplyDeleteI like that you said what you were feeling at the time in the plane like my stomach was stuffed with butterflys.But maybe next time you couldmake the writing smaller so you can fit more writing in one spot but I like that you put in alot of descriptive words in your story to really make it exciting to read. Nice posts keep it up and please come and check out my blog.
Thanks for the feedback just so you know I did not go anywhere but it was sort of a remake of me going to australia. But over all thank you for the feedback.
ReplyDeleteHello Kobe
ReplyDeleteGreat post, I really liked the way you told us what happened in the airport. I always wondered what it would feel like to think your flight is going to get canceled. Maybe next time you could make it a little bit longer and tell us what it felt like on the plan.
Any ways BYEE
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Hi Kobe
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you explained how you felt before you took off. perhaps next time you could add more about the trip and the plane ride. I've been on a plane ride and I feel very nervous before and during the plane ride.bye
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