Kobes calender art
This is my calender art about the seven wokka.I use show not tell show not tell is were you do things like.felt on the inside, felt on the outside, saw, taste, action, said, thought and heard instead of i'm going to the park tomorrow.The story is about a kid named Matiu and his parents had to leave because Earth was dying from pollution.
Great opening paragraph it had a lot of good punctuation in it.
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ReplyDeletehi kobe I like how you have put in great punctuation.It was a bit sad that the earth was dying from pollution, Maybe next time you could tell us a bit more on what the story was about.
ReplyDeleteHere is my link if you would like to comment. https://odskeiom.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeletegreat poem I liked the way you jumped into it. I also like the painting maybe next time you could have better punctuation. here is my link if you would like to have a look https://odslucam.blogspot.co.nz