I thought it was great how you put that really od ending with a daredevil jumping into a volcano.I always wondered what it would be like to climb mount everest and not get hypothermia witch you most likely will.Next time you could probably make ti have more sense to it like when you rite i see a near cave i go there to stay the night instead of saying i go there you could say so i went to it and stayed the night
I thought it was great how you put that really od ending with a daredevil jumping into a volcano.I always wondered what it would be like to climb mount everest and not get hypothermia witch you most likely will.Next time you could probably make ti have more sense to it like when you rite i see a near cave i go there to stay the night instead of saying i go there you could say so i went to it and stayed the night
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