Monday, 2 July 2018

My bike ride wevide


3 comments:

  1. Hi Koby that was amazing wow i loved the background the music but the sad thing is that it was really blurry so i could barely read it.please come to my blog!

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  2. Hi Kobe I love your wevideo also the music. The thing that I think you could do more is work on your punctuation and put more detail in to your writing.
    I liked how you described who you did it with.
    COOL wevideo

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